A wet Whittier walk takes us out while others are weathering inside at work, in car, or cafe. We're without, my family, shelter or occupation save to traipse beneath drops and see The hills half-hidden in fog like the homes and yards we pass behind shut doors and high hedges. The kids spy stepping stones between two homes leading through a jasmine-wreathed gate into an unknown. And look! There's a window in that roof, an attic perhaps. And a gap under bush going somewhere we're not given to know. Can we peek o’er fence or in window to discover how we’d live in another’s half-hidden space? Back to our home that we own, we pile boots and jackets by the rear door. On the stove, broth boils down frosting windows, and we’ll have clean sheets on beds when the dryer is done.
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Love the language and the rhythm - especially in "Can we peek o'er fence or in window to discover how we'd live in another's half-hidden space?" Sometimes on my walks, I imagine myself sitting in a particularly attractive window, looking out. The unknown.
LOVE this! I felt like I could walk along with you around the neighborhood -- and I did love that neighborhood :)